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The baby cried loudly, demanding attention from its parents. They tried to soothe it, but it refuses to be comforted. Eventually, after much rocking and singing, the baby falls asleep.
Paragraph (Corrected)
The baby cried loudly, demanding attention from its parents. They tried to soothe it, but it refused to be comforted. Eventually, after much rocking and singing, the baby fell asleep.